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While all the art was nice, it was severley lacking in animation. For instance when the characters were jumping at each other, their feet didn't move at all. I think the build up was a bit much too, I was expecting a longer fight.
Author's Response:
yeah i know i kinda screwed this up not at all what i wanted, but was only my first flash so coulda been worse but yeah coulda been a whole lot better
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Nice flash with a strong message. The characters were well drawn, but I think it could have used some more animation. I don't think you give yourself enough credit, I've really liked all of your flashes that I have watched so far.
Author's Response:
i was revamping this with more animation but never got round to it, i am doing a wil e cyotoe episode which am animating fully just is gonna take some time.
thnx
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I guess I can't expect much from a character test. The character looked alright, It nose sort of looked like a mouth though. I think you might want to work on the walking animation a bit more too, it looked like a very stiff waddle. The yawn looked good.
Author's Response:
yeah walking sucked, this was just something to practice on, the more i practice the better will get
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The only difference I could tell was that you changed how the alien looked. Well, just like the first one, this was great.
You might want to check your grammar, It should be "from a distant world". Don't sweat the small stuff though, this was really good.
Author's Response:
em added bit at start redid alien, had alien spinning made the cow move a bit, not alot but i think was enough to improve it
thnx
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This was really good. You really have a knack for using light and shadow to make things look very realistic. I liked the music too. I think it's funny that you get inspired by others blammed work...at least you'll always have inspiration I guess...
Author's Response:
:P lol yeah lots of lost ideas to half inch
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I'm not really sure what was going on, but it looked good. The music fit the mood well, and the red sttod out against all the black, white, and greys. I think it ended a bit to abruptly, I kept waiting, thinking it wasn't over yet at the "...yummy..." screen.
Author's Response:
yeah sorry i thought the ending was lacking, the original had credits but never got round to putting any
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I think this would be more suitable for an intro to a cartoon. I mean, there really wasn't much to it. Nice use of light and shadow though. The moon looked really good too.
Author's Response:
it actually was, when was refitting fire and snow this was the intro but never finished the refit so didn't get shown, but i spent so long doing the light rising i decided to show it anyway
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I liked the anime style, with the close up of their faces and the constantly changing camera views, but I wish it was a bit longer. It ended way too suddenly. I would like to see more of this, but seeing that it was submitted in late 2003, I'd say that's not likely.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the supporttive review. I agree with you about making the movie longer.
Someday, I might go back and finish all my work.
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This was a really good bunch of little movies. I commend you guys on you wonderful music selection too. I'd say the best part was the loaf of bread at the beginning, awaiting it's Chocobo Jam. Nice Work.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, I thank you very much.
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This was really wierd. SOme of the pictures were funny, but I could have done without the speaker-exploding sounds. I guess this wasn't that bad though.
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