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I've never played jet grind radio, so maybe that's why I don't get this. I didn't understand what was going on, and it ended very suddenly. I like the music and the River City Ransom backgrounds. Nice work making the sprites.
Author's Response:
i'm not proud of the ending, but that's only because i was getting tired, but wanted to submit that day, so i did a lazy ending.
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This was a good FBF movie. I'm not sure how good of an intro it was though. Everything was sort of tied together, but I wasn't completely sure what was happening. I thought the music was really good.
I must ask, why did you choose to color only the ending moments?
Author's Response:
i know it's not a good intro to anything.
i guess i wanted an evolution feel to it.
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This had some funny parts.I prefer real voices to that computer sounding stuff. I think the mouth movements could have been more in sync with the voices too.
Author's Response:
if i wasn't so picky, then i would have accepted help from a human voice actor. but i wanted to show that a stick figure can have more soul than a generic anime character, which is exactly the point. i wanted this to be a generic parody of all the generic anime flashes on NG.
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These were ok. I don't think the menu was really necessary though, it could have been one long movie since all the parts were quite short. The sound could have been a bit better too, it was kind of crackly at some points.
Author's Response:
i think the audio on this movie is excellent.
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The animation was really choppy, and while you did add sound, there was still way too much silence at certain points. I wasn't really sure what was going on either. I think this could have been a lot better.
Author's Response:
i had absolutely no idea on what i was doing. this is the first movie in which i use tweens and movie clips at the same time.
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None of these were all that special, not really good enough to pass judgement, but put together they weren't that bad. This was a nice way to consolidate a buch of unfinished animations, and get them off your computer.
Author's Response:
thanks. there wasn't really much thought put into this, but it's a sort of "sequel" to my random collection a while back, to show how much i've improved.
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While the layout was good, and I liked that you put background music in this one, it was too simple. Even someone like me with almost no HTML experience knows this stuff. I think you should have waited and added more to this before submitting.
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The art and animation was great, and the sound fit well. I think the beginning story could use some work, but hopefully it deepens as the story goes on. There were some grammar mistakes that could be fixed too. Other than that, this looks like a great start to a series.
Author's Response:
XD ya, it may look kike a cliche story, but, it has some twists that i think ppl will like, i hope so lol
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The graphics were well done, and I liked the song. A great flash for Christmas with a good message. Nice job on this one.
Author's Response:
XD yay, thanks for ur review =D
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The art and animation was well done, the weapons looked really great too. The music didn't fit at all though, I hope you change it to something more appropriate for the full movie.
You might also think about renaming it, "Dark Light" sounds super-cheesy. Regardless of the title though, this looks like it will be really good.
Author's Response:
ya the music on the actual movie doesnt hav anything to do with this musci so dont worry XD
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